Score: 6

"Not Great"

submission: Knife Shorts 1

date: July 25, 2008

I wasn't too keen on this, I mean I can see what you are trying to do here and people have done it before, but I don't think this really came together too well. The blood just looks like a thick brush with the colour red, I know it might take longer to add shading on each frame, but it would look much better than just a solid red colour that you have here.

The first stick figure too looked very deformed, need to work on the art there a bit, much of the animation inline with the video though did seem to be well timed which is good, so nice work on that. The audio was okay, easy to hear and everything, no problems there. Overall, you have an idea but I think it needs more work.

2/5

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Score: 6

"Hmm"

submission: SSBB: Pit's Wii Remote

date: July 25, 2008

I'm not really too keen on this, it seems really too short and the joke doesn't seem to be all the funny, I mean I get it but then you have two things left on the field so it doesn't make any sense. You could have expanded the joke a little or something, or maybe I would have to have played the game to really get the joke.

The graphics are okay though they look a little off in parts, like a little wonky but none the less, still pretty decent. The sound and voice acting isn't too bad on the whole, it's all pretty clear and everything, which is always good to hear. Not much more I can say about this, as it's a bit short so yeah, could be much longer but not too bad overall.

3/5

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Score: 7

"Not Too Bad"

submission: Star Fox: Loopy Battle

date: July 25, 2008

Well the graphics whern't too bad although they did look traced, they did also look like they lacked a bit of charactor to them. The voice acting was very clear and everything which was good and you had subtitles to them which fit in with the whole flash as well as being easy to read, though parts of the voice acting could be improved like the part where he said "Whoa", that sounded to lack charactor.

The animation was okay but some parts just seemed a little off, like the looping movement of the ships, seemed to kind of jerk in a way. But most parts of the animation seemed to be okay and the mouth movment was pretty decent but it did need more work on facial expressions, they just looked expressionless.

3/5

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Score: 10

"Nice Work"

submission: Best Friends Forever(Old)

date: July 25, 2008

This is a pretty good game, although one thing I would really suggest with this game is that you find a diffrent jump or switch button because I kept finding myself acidently pressing shift instead of z which made things a little slow. Although there wasn't really anything to worry about time wise which was good to see in this game, some have timers and I find that annoying.

The graphics here where pretty good and the music was decent too, I don't remember there being any sound effects when I was playing this though, I would suggest having those in for fun. The graphics here are decent and look good to me, the animation of everything is also pretty nice, so overall, very good work on this game.

5/5

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Score: 6

"Nothing New"

submission: Newgrounds Info: Extended

date: July 24, 2008

There's nothing really new to this that hasn't been said in the FAQ or in other flash like this, although you have included some of the old images that where used on Newgrounds, which is a pretty good idea. One problem with the old ones though is you included the mod aura, there was no mod aura in the old Newgrounds so this is somewhat misleading and should have a notice there saying that these never existed.

Everything else though is pretty standard, I can't say I gained anything I didn't know already from this. Presentation wise you almost have it too, you just need to find a smoother font and put the info in Newgrouns style boxes, just to make it look a bit neater.

This might be helpful to some people, but you could explain parts a little more, especilly with the old images, like say what the gems where for. As well as putting a little more information on the blam and protect ranks, maybe say how many points are required to get them, that would also help.

2/5

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Score: 7

"Okay"

submission: Abe Simpson Soundboard

date: July 18, 2008

As far as soundboards go, this works and is well what I would expect from a soundboard, there is nothing really wrong with the whole thing, decent audio and everything. Although, the buttons are kind of an off colour, I would suggest yellow for those or something a little simler to that because as they are, they don't fit in. Also, make the image a button as oppose to the text because if you hover over part with no text, you can't click it.

Other than the look and such of the button, they fit down the screen pretty well and keep the image in the centre looking fine which is decent quality in itself. I wasn't so sure about the extra in this, it wasn't really ammusing or worth watching, so eh. Everything else worked fine and as a soundboard yeah, this is okay.

3/5

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Score: 5

"Okay"

submission: Tribute: K0rkz

date: July 18, 2008

Well there wasn't really much here aside from text and the same picture used twice, I mean the fading of the text was good I guess, lol. The whole story in this is pretty decent, though you could have animated the story as oppose to just having just text, or having some animation of crying or something, just to give something more visual because a lot of people probably don't like sitting through text.

The audio was okay, decent to hear and did have kind of a sad tune to it, so in that sense it did fit with the whole thing. Everything did move from part to part well, so obviously a well thought out story, but it doesn't really have anything more than that to it, very lacking overall.

1/5

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Score: 9

"Decent Scene Creator"

submission: MSC 3

date: July 18, 2008

As far as scene creators go and other forms of flash like this, I generally don't like them but this one seems to be decent enough. There are plenty of options here and everything seems to work fine for me, also I like the fact that you have a mute button in this, lol. The tools you have are decent and can get everything done fine, infact you seem to have something for everything that someone would need which is good.

Although some of the backgrounds and such don't look all that great, there is plenty of choice for objects and such, so someone could create a decent scene with this. Although you could add a way for users to recolour objects and drawing their own backgrounds, that would be good if you could. But otherwise, good work, a bit laggy at times though.

4/5

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Score: 9

"Nice Job"

submission: Businessman Blues

date: July 13, 2008

I know this flash was pretty short but that doesn't matter, it's still funny, making it longer would probably have killed this flash. The joke at the end of this was unexpected just from viewing this from the start and it is kind of funny as is the joke at the start. Though the joke with the file was more obvious than the final one you have here.

The artwork here was also very well done and some pretty good animation too, good sound and everything was clear. I have no problems with this flash, it seems everything is done well. Really good work overall, especilly considering the length of this flash.

5/5

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Score: 0

"Pointless"

submission: The Dot of Excellence 2

date: July 11, 2008

I'm guessing the point of this is to get low reviews or something along those lines becuase the flash itself doesn't have a point to it. This is just some still pictures slaped onto a stage with some badly looping music, sure if it looped better it might be a little better but still, wouldn't be much of a flash.

The quality of the pictures is pretty bad, small too so kind of pointless and the audio is also pretty bad quality too, doesn't loop well and everything but you know all this I'm guessing. Do something more productive if you want to use the pictures, make a quiz with them or something, just something with some entertainment value.

0/5

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