Score: 10

"Okay?!"

submission: The Snowman~

date: December 14, 2008

That was certainly quite strange, in a way it seems you kept to your usually humour style towards the end but still, somewhat odd. I mean I was expecting a twist, something would be wrong if you made it peacful all the way through, haha. Although I was just epecting the kid to suck off the snowman, so you still managed to pull a supprise here.

One thing that bothed me a little was that you drew the kid bigger than the snowman at one point in this, just an oddity though, nothing to dwell on. Most of the art and animation was pretty good from my view which is always good to see. For the ending, you could have thrown in another charator just walking by or a dog peeing on the body, but it was fine as it was.

5/5

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Score: 6

"Intresting but Tedious"

submission: The Timewaster Ultra

date: November 11, 2008

It's an intresting game but after a while, it just seems to get a little tedious, the hand doesn't always respond to where you click it which uses time up and at times you will end up with a few seconds to do challenging tasks. Sure it gives a challenge but it gets irratating after a while having to start back from a check point till you get it right, repertition does teach you for the future but it certainly isn't fun to repeat the same step over and over.

The music was fine, although I thought the opening into part took a little too long to get on with it, but I can over look that. The graphics are good, nice drawing and everything, the hand looks pretty detailed, though it isn't too responcive at times, such as the level with the leaver. More time for some levels would be good as well as levels loading not using the time up.

As a timewaster, I would rather play something that doesn't get as tedious, giving a constant ammount of time for every level would be a great start. But I just find myself getting bored with this after a while, I lack patiants.

3/5

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Score: 10

"This is Great"

submission: The Assumption Song

date: September 21, 2008

I really found this quite amusing, the song really did sound like it was going to say something dirty and even working out the pattern, it still made me think that way though it was also partly due to your animation here which went well with the music to give that kind of impression, so that was good.

The art and animation I thought was done really well, I can see no problems with it, infact I kind of like the style this was done it, so that's good. Maybe it did lack colour and some shading in parts, but I soon got over that, the ending to this was also very good I thought.

Still, I was so expecting something rude to be said, does that mean there is something wrong with me? :(

5/5

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Score: 9

"Alright"

submission: Omgiitsaomsfc

date: September 4, 2008

It's pretty much at the same standard as most other random sprite flash I would say, which is a good thing in that sense, it has some flow to it. I also like the intro better with this one to your previous submission, the addition of a skip button on there is good, the menu is also much better, simple though has no real background, could add one.

The animation itself is good and well presented, it's as good as most sprites also the audio quality here is good, you also had some pretty amusing jokes in here. The part with the radio channel was pretty good, that was one of my favourite parts to this. The only real problem I have here is the lack of parts in total, but there was enough, pretty good overall.

4/5

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Score: 10

"Nice Work"

submission: Wallet VS. Pico

date: August 23, 2008

I thought this was done very well, although I'm not too keen on the Naruto references, lol, the Dragonball ones are bareable. The graphics are pretty decent in this which is good to see, no problems with the animation, the colours where good although one of the backgrounds you drew with this was kind of empty in a way, lol.

The ending I thought was pretty good, some of the fighting animation also seemed a little off. It was a pretty amusing ending, though the cutting in half was kind of eh, still pretty nice. I would work on the menu though if I where you, it seems like you just slaped a load of images on and a play button, lol, make it look neater. Otherwise, good work overall :)

5/5

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Score: 10

"Lol, Nice"

submission: Strawberry's Time Travel

date: August 15, 2008

I thought that was done pretty well, a very decent flash you here, the voices are pretty clear but it might have helped to have some subtitles to this as well. The graphics are pretty decent here, though I'm not too keen on the fire you have on the floor at one part, I think that could have been done a little better.

The very end frame is drawn badly, haha but nothing wrong with it, as it is well the ending frame, I liked the whole plot you have in this flash, it seems to come together pretty well and the ending was also quite amusing. Not too keen on your choice of colours for somethings but eh, everything looks fine to me and the music is pretty decent too.

Happy Clock Day

5/5

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Score: 8

"Alright"

submission: Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 7

date: August 12, 2008

Personally, I'm not too keen on this one to be honest, I mean it is okay but there are a few things I would have rather seen in this, I would have found it much funnier if he started to chew through the gum. I know that would also be kind of disgusting, lol, but it would have amused me personally which is all I'm thinking of here.

The ending is also kind of bleh to me, I was expecting him to crash into something or someone, like one of the girls who has appeared in some of your other flash, that might have been a bit more amusing. Those are just my ideas anyway, this is okay and the timing of the ending is good, so nice work on that, also you have the hand joke in this again, which is clever to see, just don't over use it.

4/5

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Score: 10

"Great Game"

submission: Bubble Tanks 2

date: August 12, 2008

A very easy game to pick up too I have to say, it's not too hard to learn which is the first good thing about this game. The drawing and animation in this is also very good, no problems with that, very clear and plesent to look at while playing through the verious levels. One thing I still strugle to get is what the rings do other than provide a shield, lol, I'll work it out.

The audio is very good here, very fitting music and I like how if you lose all your sheild rings, you are sent to a bubble with easier things to kill so you can get more rings back. Some of the enemies are a little hard I have found, but overall it's still a very fun game to play.

5/5

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Score: 8

"Lol, Nice"

submission: asdfmovie

date: August 12, 2008

That was pretty amusing, although somewhat short overall, I would have liked to have seen a few more or some that took longer. I mean all the shorts are nice and everything, just I feel more would have been nice. Some of them seemed to be funnier than others, some I just didn't really get, but eh, that's just me, lol.

The drawing style and animation style of this is very good and I did like that quite a bit, the voice acting was great, no problems with that and the music you used in this was also pretty good to. So good quality sound and decent drawing, no other problems overall other than the length of the whole thing, maybe you can make another in future.

4/5

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Score: 9

"Oh no!"

submission: Edible Castle #9

date: August 9, 2008

Episode 10 can't go missing at this moment in time! Ahaha, anyway, that seems like a pretty well planned and thought out event for the series which is pretty good to have, some participation. Would be good to see episode 10 returned as soon as possible though, with all this build up and everything.

Anyway, the actual flash here as with all the others has some very good drawings to them, I like the style of these, also the sound effects being done with a voice is amusing, much better than actually using the sound. Good voice acting and some pretty good jokes, a few I wasn't too keen on here though, most where okay.

Overall, I thought this was a good animation, plot wasn't as good as some previous ones though, if you involved the audiance infront of the stage in this a little more, it would have been nice. The bottle being thrown was good though.

5/5

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