Score: 5

"Nothing New"

submission: Awesome Sprite Tutorial

date: 15 hours ago

Pardon me for not really liking this or finding it all that intresting but from what I can say is that there is nothing really new here, there are many sprite tutorials around and well this might explain it a little diffrently, it isn't really all that new to me. That's the major problem with it, other than that though, the presentation seems okay, but I question the use of the Wright sprite.

The lack of audio although does make it smaller, it also makes it less intresting, try to find a small loop and use that for audio and add a mute button for people who don't want to hear the audio. Everything else seems to look okay and explained pretty well too, although I'd do it a diffrent way, everyone is diffrent.

2/5

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Score: 8

"Alright"

submission: The Music Video Collab

date: 17 hours ago

It was a pretty decent collab, I mean there where some good parts as well as some not so good parts, though none of them where really bad. I was glad this had a menu too, though the bio thing could have been payed out a little better, each bit seemed to have diffrent colour text and wasn't too consistant, I wasn't too keen on that presentation wise.

But overall, I think this is a decent collab with it's good parts, although the idea could do with tweeking, I mean having diffrent bits of songs is okay if you can get them to work well one after the other, this just seemed like they where random and didn't really have much flow in my view. Otherwise though, prettey decent as I say.

4/5

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Score: 4

"Needs Work"

submission: Dragonball Z Episode 2

date: July 4, 2008

This needs much work doing to it, for a start having voice actors to do the speaking would be much better than having the text for them, that and the text doesn't seem to be presented too well, have it in a speech bubble or something, it would look better that way.

Also, the use of sprites and drawn backgrounds, pick one or the other, this doesn't really work here, if you improve your drawing then it might work but right now, it doesn't. I'd suggest just drawing everything and not using sprites to be honest, it might be harder but eventually it could look much better. The audio is okay though, but everything else needs work.

2/5

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Score: 10

"Hehe"

submission: Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6

date: July 4, 2008

That was pretty ammusing, the style of the drawing here doesn't seem to change much, pretty low detail charators but that's okay, it does work in a way, though kind of odd how they don't have arms. Anyway, the flash itself is pretty good and everything, decent animation for most part, even if a little simple in looks, lol. The sound effects are good and the voice acting is also good too.

I did like the plot here, it's kind of simple yet unexpected, the whole thing does seem to work though and well I must say. At first it just seemed like something silly, then you have an explosion, lol. So yeah, overall, there is nothing wrong with this and on top of that, I do like this episode more so than previous ones, good work.

5/5

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Score: 7

"Private Messages"

submission: Bahamut's Favourite PMs

date: July 4, 2008

Are suppost to be private, lolol. But all the same, I lack getting stupid messages from people, I've had a few but yeah, some of those where silly, I would have picked more supid ones if I where you though. As for a gallary at the end, that would have been much better to see in my view, might be annoying to make but could have been more intresting for the viewer.

The idea is okay, as with the idea for the reviews, but I don't think this one was as good, I mean it did lack a bit of humour in comparison to the review one, more stupid PMs could have fixed that. I'd also like to say that your mouse is almost as big as the sprite, lmao. But pretty good, just needs more.

3/5

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Score: 9

"Solid Effort"

submission: space mision

date: June 28, 2008

It looks like you really put a lot of effort into this flash, that's what I like to see. It might not be so good on the eyes graphics wise, but what it lacks in graphics, it sure does gain in plot and story. The theme is maybe a little common but you really pulled it off well and I love the idea that space is actually purple, that was very clever, I didn't expect to see that.

The audio you had on this flash, it all seemed to work with the parts that you where drawing, it was also very clear and fitting with everything, well planned out sound track. The colours where pretty odd though, you might want to work on getting them to fit better with clothes, but they are original, so that's great. Good luck on future works!

5/5

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Score: 7

"Okay"

submission: Delayed Radar

date: June 28, 2008

It's not too bad overall, but I must say it is kind of annoying, you could have an easier way of finding the orbs because it gets a little tedious in my view to hunt around the screen with a clumsy big circle to try to find them and then shoot. So you might want to work on that for a start off. The menu looked pretty nice which was okay and the sound for that was good.

The main game I noticed did lack sounds, you could have had a few sound effects in this like shooting and such. I would also suggest a diffrent concept to the game, shooting yellow balls to me just seems a little boring, maybe use the code here and expand a little, like maybe shooting ships from a sub, that could be much more intresting.

2/5

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Score: 2

"More Work Needed"

submission: Wegra Adventure 3

date: June 28, 2008

This really needs much more work, there isn't really much animation, though you do have some here and the graphics aren't really all that great. I mean sure it could be good if you had a much funnier plot to it, but this really seemed like you where trying a little too hard to do something random, but didn't really come out too well, the voice could have been better, this was too deep, slow and hard to hear.

It was also bad how you didn't draw a whole lot in many parts of this, or you drew something that wasn't really related too well, you should make things somewhat relevent and draw all the way if you are going to do something. I mean, if you are too lazy to draw, take up something like sprites or something, lol. Overall, much work is needed.

1/5

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Score: 10

"I Loved It"

submission: Best present ever

date: June 27, 2008

Such an amazing flash, so much more like a cartoon that anything, one of the best things I have seen in a while too, I really loved the story and everything. It was very amusing and all, good voice acting and amazing characters, reminds me of the cartoons I used to watch when I was younger, the legs with no tops are very Cow&Chicken looking, lol. The music was amazing and fit very well as with all the sound effects, good ending too.

I can't see any problems with this, other than being a little grainy at parts but yeah, I guess compression does that, lol. Great animation and drawings, worked very well, so overall I have no problems with this, none that show that's for sure. Very good work, definatly one of my favourites now :3

5/5

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Score: 8

"Pretty Good"

submission: Panda ESCAPE

date: June 25, 2008

I thought this was pretty good, I mean the graphics here seemed to be good and everything was drawn pretty well, so no problems with that and much of the animation was also good, excpet for the newspaper spin, I belive that could have been a little fasted. Also with the newspaper, you should have used a simple font like Arial to give it more of a newspaper type look.

I also have a slight problem with the music changes, I mean the music was good and fit the parts it was going to but the changes for them seemed too sudden and I also belive you could have had some sound effects here too, that would have been good to hear. But otherwise, good work on the animation and the story here.

4/5

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