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This doesn't really sound to have any direction to it and just doesn't really sound all that great overall. The whole thing sounds out of tune and just thrown together randomly, the large pause at the end is also a waste of time, it doesn't make it loop all that well, just sounds really bad. You could remove the pause and try to make a loop out of this, if you wanted to.
You could really improve on everything here, there isn't really much here that is worth listerning to, the whole thing just sounds like a mess, you have a change early on which doesn't go smoothly and the ending is just too sudden, as well as this being far too short.
1/5
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Well I haven't heard about this song in a while now, nor have I heard the song in a while, lol. Though I must say I'm not too keen on the lyrics with the style, it doesn't seem to work that well, that's the major problem with this in my view. The singing itself sounds to be done very well and it's very clear but just doesn't really work with much of the lyrics.
The whole backing and instrumental part sounds to be very good and is decent to listen to, though it seems to go off the whole tune of the original, which is kind of odd in a way. But good try on making a diffrent version, just don't think this did it all that well, sorry.
4/5
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Although it is a little loud and busy for much of it, it does seem to flow well and everything seems to come together well, good opening to this as well as a good ending. Although I can't help but think that parts of this do seem to sound a little repetitive, sorry if it isn't but in parts it does seem to sound that way.
The kind of 'ohhhh' sound in the background is pretty good and works with the whole thing, also the beats here are good. Not much more I can say here, it has some good parts, like the less busy part in the middle, I liked that bit better than the rest of this I have to say, lol.
5/5
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It has a pretty simple sound to it in a way, not that it's a bad thing it just doesn't really sound to have too much to it to me, but it does seem to work pretty well with a good thing. Kind of space like in a way even, it's also slow which I think adds to the flow of the whole thing, kind of bringing it together and everything.
It's not very long although it does make up for that with the loop, it does loop well I have to say, so that's a good thing. Without looking at the bar, I can't really tell what part is the start and which part is the end, lol, so good work on that part and overall.
4/5
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It's kind of an intresting tune, I mean it starts off having a fairly playful tune and then in parts breaks into some more livly tunes that sound like they have a bit more to them. That change to me does work very well, there is no problem with the change from part to part from what I can hear, so good work with that, also I like how it seems to stay diffrent much of the way through.
In a way, this sounds pretty comical, not sure if you ment it to have a silly tune to it, but that's what it sounds like to me, lol. Everything does come together well, although after a while it sounds to lose much of it's original opening. Great use of time here, it's long but also really good to listen to and it does have some hospital sounds to it.
Do I hear a certain theme tune in this or am I imagining it? Around the 4 minute part, lol, anyway eitherway it all sounds good overall as for the ending, well I have to say it's certainly much louder and a lot diffrent to the rest, pretty well done as well, so very good work overall.
5/5
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It sounds very good all the way through and has quite a clam and relaxed tune to it, which does sound very good and does work. Although, the one thing that really bothers me about this track is the ending, you have a good opening to the track but the ending just sounds to be a little rushed or something, I mean it doesn't fade fully out.
Everything else though is good, maybe it could have been a little longer though, the middle part also sounds pretty nice to me. The overall sound to this tune is very good and it has nice flow, no real improves could be made other than for the ending, so nice work.
4/5
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It's got a good beat to it, although a little loud but that aside, it sounds very good and done very well, everything seems to be played well, although there are parts with the piano I think it is that doesn't really sound good in parts, it sometimes to me sounds like it goes a little out of tune. It's hard to say when it does because I can hear a few times, might be interntional though.
Everything else seems to come together very well and the beats are good, plenty of flow here, decent use of time and the opening was pretty good. You say the ending is a bad but to me I think it sounds to work in a way, so good work with that too.
5/5
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Everything here sound very good, the vocals here are good and everything has been sung very well from what I can hear. They fit in very well with the whole tune which helps, so good work with that, although it does sound a little too dark for my liking, it is still done very well. The whole back beat is good, though some parts do sound a little fuzzy but it's still good.
The lyrics are very clear and easy to hear, so that's good they also sound like a lot of thought went into these lyrics. Nice use of the length too, it's pretty long but it does sounds good with all that use, the lyrics make it more than the beat in my view, I also think some of the effects here are done very well, very good work overall with this.
5/5
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Glad you liked it.
Appreciate the feedback.
Yes, the lyrics took some work, but overall
I'm quite satisfied with them.
Maybe they are a bit "dark" for some,
but in the end it's all about hope. :)
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It's certainly very easy to listen to, which I would say is a pretty good thing, the start was done very well and I did like that, worked well. Though it did seem to be a little lacking most of the way through in parts, I mean it does all come together very well but I thought it could have done with a few more beats in parts, that could have sounded nice if done in the right way.
The fading out at the end worked well, did it's job and ended well, so good work on that, pretty good use of time, though I do have to say it did sound a little repetitive in parts. Overall though, it was pretty good, not problems with this other than sounding like it needed more.
4/5
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I'm not really too keen on this, I mean it's nice to hear something with vocals for a change, so that is definatly a good thing, but I'm really not too keen on the high pitched voice of this, I don't really think it works and to me it doesn't really sound that nice. The pauses in parts of this are also kind of bad in my view, kind of disrupts the song to me.
Most of the rest is done well though, which is good, I belive I have heard this song so it does sound simler, which yeah is a good thing. There is nothing wrong with most of the beats here, they all came together well, my only major problem is my dislike of the vocals, sorry.
3/5
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