Score: 10

"Pretty Neat"

submission: [TMM43] Breathe

date: July 23, 2008

I think this all comes together well, there is nothing wrong with this that I can hear, you have some very good build up to this song, which is good for an intro. The ending also sounds to be done very well, which is good, everything here sounds to flow through the track very well, good use of time and plenty of changes through the whole thing.

The overall beat to this is also very good, the background beat seems to soundpretty constant all through the whole thing where it is and that keeps the whole thing together very well, although the main part of what you can hear stands out enough for there to be more to listen to. Great work on this overall.

5/5

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Score: 9

"Good"

submission: RGH: Aero(on a plane) "(:"

date: July 23, 2008

It sounds like a pretty good track here, you have quite a lot to this one which is good to hear, a nice amount of change through the whole thing, the opening is also good, although a little slow to build up, I really think it works. This is not too repetitive either, which is also very nice to hear, some parts of this I wouldn't link to an aeroplain though, lol.

The ending could do with a little work though, it just seems to sound like it suddenly ends, maybe fade it out in a way, that would be good to have. Other than the ending, I can't hear any problems with this overall, so yeah, pretty good work on this, just work on the ending.

5/5

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Score: 8

"Alright"

submission: RGH: Looming Picabyss

date: July 23, 2008

Okay, this isn't too bad I mean it is overall a pretty decent sounding track which is good, so nice work on that but I do think that it is a bit repetitive, such as the opening, the same sort of beat through most of that could be heard, maybe change it a little and build into the main part quicker. There isn't anything here that really stands out to me either, although it does sound good.

The length for this is good and much of the time seems to sound like it has been used well, but there are moments here where it does sound repetitive. I like the way you have ended this though, it does work very well, the second half to this in my view is much better than the first half.

4/5

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Score: 5

"Okay"

submission: Jason Needs A Girlfriend 3

date: July 23, 2008

Well this is better than the first, it sounds to be more balanced for most of it, which is okay but you still then change it so that they are coming out of diffrent ears part the way through, you really should make the vocals balance otherwise it just get annoying, especilly considering the length for this. The background is okay and that sounds very good.

The one major problem with this is that the lyrics just get far too repetitive, you should consider making a shorter song so that you are repeating yourself over and over. Like with the first one, this is hard to listen to, it starts off okay but then just goes downhill from that point.

2/5

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Score: 3

"Terrible"

submission: Jason Needs A Girlfriend

date: July 23, 2008

Wow, that was really terrible, you had the vocals coming out of one side and the backing from another, that unbalance makes it very hard to listen to, considering I use headphones too. I would strongly suggest keeping the whole thing balanced out at both sides, otherwise it just ends up sounding like a mess as well as being annoying. The background is okay and works with the vocals but as mentioned before, the unbalance makes it sound bad.

The lyrics are kind of funny, sadly though because of the way this is done, it's hard to pay attention to much of the lyrics, it was hard just listerning to this all the way. I really hope you fix that for future works, you might have a decent idea here but it didn't really come out too well.

1/5

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Score: 7

"Muffled"

submission: Fantasia Nocturne No.2

date: July 23, 2008

I'm not too keen on the muffled sound of this tune, it doesn't really work right and it makes it sound very quite which is kind of eh. The actually playing sounds okay and in a way it seems to have a little more to it than the first one and does in a way sound a little better but it's really hard to say that this is overall better than the orignal because of the muffled sounds.

I do think the piano is played very well here and the length is very good, but I can't really say I like it too much because of the lack of audio quality here, so that makes it lose a lot for me, sorry. But otherwise, it sounds like you have done a good job on this, I hope you can tidy up the quality in future.

4/5

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Score: 9

"Pretty Nice"

submission: Fantasia Nocturne No.1

date: July 23, 2008

Although I'm not a huge fan of the lack of a constant background that sticks out, much of this still sounds very good, it also seems to sound very dark and slow, which sounds pretty good the way it's played. The piano here is played very well, I can't hear anything wrong with the way it's played, so great work on that, though the louder notes do sound to have a little static on them.

There is some background here, but I would have wanted a little more, not sure how you could do that if you are just using a piano so heh. Anyway, I have no problems with anything else there, the length is good and you have both a decent opening and ending to this, good job.

5/5

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Score: 9

"Good Work"

submission: Town Theme Loop

date: July 23, 2008

Although I think it might be a little nicer if it was a bit faster than this, it would sound much happier and such, lol. This is a little pokemon like though, if I didn't read the description, that's what I would have thought you where trying to create here, which isn't bad because I think the pokemon games do have some pretty decent town music, so yeah.

Other than what it sounds like, everything here is well played and comes together very well, it does make a good loop too which is what you indended, so that's good. Though it does seem to be a bit long for most loops, but for a game that wouldn't matter I guess, anyway, overall good work with this!

5/5

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Score: 8

"Good"

submission: Bad Touch - Bloodhound Gang

date: July 21, 2008

I do wish you had put some singing to this though, that would have made this much better, it's a good song but I think it needs the singing to make it compleat. Although this does sound good without it, eh, maybe just me big a bit fussy, lol. The ending here seems to end a little too sudden though, kind of sounds a little unfinished to me, so not sure about that.

The sound of this does keep with the same tune as the original so that is good to hear and everything sounds good except for the ending. So overall, no real problems with this, I have to say that you did so a pretty good job redoing the Bad Touch song or well, tune.

4/5

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Score: 4

"Odd"

submission: Soul Summon

date: July 19, 2008

That's certain diffrent I must say, there isn't much here that is that good to listen too, it's far too muffled for my taste I have to say. The voice in this is pretty easy to hear at times, then not at other parts of this, though I'm guessing the point is to get the words into someones head in an attempt to get them to do something, lmao, no I don't quite get it.

The background is played okay but it's not that easy to hear much as I say this whole thing is kind of muffled. Not really too keen on the overall sound of this I have to say, so sorry. I mean, if you want to buy my soul, you could make the track a little more intresting, not just odd.

2/5

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