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Pardon me for not really liking this or finding it all that intresting but from what I can say is that there is nothing really new here, there are many sprite tutorials around and well this might explain it a little diffrently, it isn't really all that new to me. That's the major problem with it, other than that though, the presentation seems okay, but I question the use of the Wright sprite.
The lack of audio although does make it smaller, it also makes it less intresting, try to find a small loop and use that for audio and add a mute button for people who don't want to hear the audio. Everything else seems to look okay and explained pretty well too, although I'd do it a diffrent way, everyone is diffrent.
2/5
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Some parts ARE new. I checked almost all sprite toturials and they skipped a few things. Oh and almost no constructive criticism in sight.
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It was a pretty decent collab, I mean there where some good parts as well as some not so good parts, though none of them where really bad. I was glad this had a menu too, though the bio thing could have been payed out a little better, each bit seemed to have diffrent colour text and wasn't too consistant, I wasn't too keen on that presentation wise.
But overall, I think this is a decent collab with it's good parts, although the idea could do with tweeking, I mean having diffrent bits of songs is okay if you can get them to work well one after the other, this just seemed like they where random and didn't really have much flow in my view. Otherwise though, prettey decent as I say.
4/5
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This needs much work doing to it, for a start having voice actors to do the speaking would be much better than having the text for them, that and the text doesn't seem to be presented too well, have it in a speech bubble or something, it would look better that way.
Also, the use of sprites and drawn backgrounds, pick one or the other, this doesn't really work here, if you improve your drawing then it might work but right now, it doesn't. I'd suggest just drawing everything and not using sprites to be honest, it might be harder but eventually it could look much better. The audio is okay though, but everything else needs work.
2/5
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Everything here sound very good, the vocals here are good and everything has been sung very well from what I can hear. They fit in very well with the whole tune which helps, so good work with that, although it does sound a little too dark for my liking, it is still done very well. The whole back beat is good, though some parts do sound a little fuzzy but it's still good.
The lyrics are very clear and easy to hear, so that's good they also sound like a lot of thought went into these lyrics. Nice use of the length too, it's pretty long but it does sounds good with all that use, the lyrics make it more than the beat in my view, I also think some of the effects here are done very well, very good work overall with this.
5/5
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Yes, the lyrics took some work, but overall
I'm quite satisfied with them.
Maybe they are a bit "dark" for some,
but in the end it's all about hope. :)
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It's certainly very easy to listen to, which I would say is a pretty good thing, the start was done very well and I did like that, worked well. Though it did seem to be a little lacking most of the way through in parts, I mean it does all come together very well but I thought it could have done with a few more beats in parts, that could have sounded nice if done in the right way.
The fading out at the end worked well, did it's job and ended well, so good work on that, pretty good use of time, though I do have to say it did sound a little repetitive in parts. Overall though, it was pretty good, not problems with this other than sounding like it needed more.
4/5
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I'm not really too keen on this, I mean it's nice to hear something with vocals for a change, so that is definatly a good thing, but I'm really not too keen on the high pitched voice of this, I don't really think it works and to me it doesn't really sound that nice. The pauses in parts of this are also kind of bad in my view, kind of disrupts the song to me.
Most of the rest is done well though, which is good, I belive I have heard this song so it does sound simler, which yeah is a good thing. There is nothing wrong with most of the beats here, they all came together well, my only major problem is my dislike of the vocals, sorry.
3/5
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